After reading the feedback:
- I need to evaluate whether or not the fact that the "unnecessary labour" piece is unfinished actually adds to the work or says something that is worth saying, as opposed to being a flaw I need to correct.
- Striking a balance between: 1) an amount of labour small enough that it doesn't feel like "labour," and 2) an amount large enough that it is impressive and doesn't seem "unnecessary," seems like the best way to communicate the point, but I will experiment further.
- I should "revalue futility" / question views on labour and futility.
