- first piece - remake without mounting, leave needle in - make it clearer that it refers to the process of its creation, possibly display sitting on a surface so it's clear that it's a piece of fabric from afar - essentially this piece worked best if you saw it while I was making it, so mounting it and making it look flat and finished detracted from it
- dates piece - remove embroidered "title" and replace with something else that hints at the need for "productivity"
- Translation show piece - needs to be more polished and/or elaborate, make it clearer that time was invested
